add Libre RISC-V Charter

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@@ -73,19 +73,22 @@ In a "Libre" context this is often extremely hard to do, as the normal
 rules of profit-maximising business (do not provide goods or services
 until payment has been received) do not apply: our "product" - the
 source code - is made available at zero monetary cost.  So it is down
-to us to ensure that part of our time is spent ensuring that everyone
-is actually rewarded, whether through contracts, sponsorship, donations,
+to us to ensure that part of our time is spent making sure that everyone
+*is* actually rewarded, whether through contracts, sponsorship, donations,
 crowd-funding and profit-sharing in the same, and so on.
 
 ## Everyone is responsible and accountable (for the "good" *and* the "bad")
 
 When we do something well, it is vital that we (alone) own and hold the
-credit for that achievement.  When we screw up, it is just as equally
-vital that we take responsibility for cleaning up our mess, and that
-nobody else is blamed *or think they own it*!  In this way, two things
-happen.  Firstly: we can rely on each other, as we trust that the tasks
-that others chose will be completed (even if they mess up a few times).
-Secondly: in our chosen opportunity to grow and learn, we know and trust
-that nobody will take that away from us, and that our achievements and
-the credit will be ours.
+credit for that achievement (nobody else takes the credit; we *accept*
+the credit).  When we screw up, it is just as equally vital that we take
+responsibility for cleaning up our mess, and that nobody else is blamed
+*or think they own it*, or tries to take it the task away from us!
+
+In this way, two vitally important things happen.  Firstly: we can rely
+on each other, as we trust that the tasks that others chose will be
+completed (even if they mess up a few times).  Secondly: in our chosen
+opportunity to grow and learn, we know and trust that nobody will take
+that away from us, and, further, that our achievements and the credit
+will be ours.