tweak word ordering

diff --git a/openpower/isans_letter.mdwn b/openpower/isans_letter.mdwn
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@@ -23,14 +23,11 @@ with people who can help us.
   Set Architecture (PPC ISA) is extended, enabling many different flavours
   within a well supported family to co-exist, long-term, without conflict,
   right across the board.
-* This will facilitate the use of PPC in novel or niche applications
-  without breaking the PPC ISA into incompatible islands.  This is about
-  more than just our project.
-* Libre-SOC's project is to extend the PPC to integrate GPU and VPU
+* This is about more than just our project. Our proposals will facilitate the use of PPC in novel or niche applications without breaking the PPC ISA into incompatible islands.
+* PPC will gain a competitive market advantage by removing the need for separate VPU or GPU functions in RTL or ASICs thus enabling lower cost systems.
+ Libre-SOC's project is to extend the PPC to integrate the GPU and VPU
   functionality directly as part of the PPC ISA (example: Broadcom
-  VideoCore IV being based around extensions to an ARC core).  By not
-  needing separate VPU or GPU RTL or ASICs this will enable lower cost
-  systems to be built so giving PPC a competitive market advantage.
+  VideoCore IV being based around extensions to an ARC core).
 * Libre-SOC's extensions will be easily adopted, as the standard GNU/Linux
   distributions will very deliberately run unmodified on our ISA,
   including full compatibility with illegal instruction requirements.