clarification

diff --git a/updates/021_2019dec29_nlnet_grants_approved.mdwn b/updates/021_2019dec29_nlnet_grants_approved.mdwn
index 8c420dd3e7578eaeb4d64831f5a48ab1e2cb0482..99e1f657f8d5d09b560e5ef86e0eec6e6dc4e62b 100644 (file)
--- a/updates/021_2019dec29_nlnet_grants_approved.mdwn
+++ b/updates/021_2019dec29_nlnet_grants_approved.mdwn
@@ -121,9 +121,10 @@ Conference: in that short time, we covered:
 * that the core OpenPower members had *already been discussing* how to make
   sure that new Libre teams with a commercial focus could join and not
   have any transparency / patent / NDA / royalty / licensing conflicts
-  of interest.  The only major thing that the other members wanted was
-  a "public relations blackout period," right around the time of announcement of
-  new standards, which sounds perfectly reasonable to me.
+  of interest.  The only major thing that the other members particularly
+  wanted was a "public relations blackout period," right around the time
+  of announcement of new standards, which sounds perfectly reasonable
+  to me.
 * that IBM will be providing a royalty-free unlimited license grant
   for *all* of its patents, as long as firstly the licensees do not
   make any effort to assert patents **against** IBM, and secondly,