update business plan

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@@ -84,12 +84,13 @@ including smartphone, netbook and chromebook products).  Competitors for
 the intermediate product include Samsung, Texas Instruments, Rockchip,
 Allwinner, AMLogic, ST Micro, Atmel, Freescale/NXP, and dozens more.
 The key distinguisher is the "niche targetting" (peripherals, built-in
-capabilities) abd yet with not one single one of them providing full
+capabilities) and yet with not one single one of them providing full
 source and firmware for CPU, GPU and VPU due to licensing of closed
-solutions they are all effectively not competitors.
+solutions they are all effectively not truly competitors.
 
-The long-term competitors include Apple, AMD, NVidia and Intel, providing
-high performance power-efficient Hybrid CPU-GPU-VPU processors.
+The long-term competitors include Apple, AMD, NVidia and Intel, where
+we will be providing the high performance power-efficient Hybrid
+CPU-GPU-VPU processors that they cannot.
 
 # Products and pricing.