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   expertise.
 * Everyone acknowledges and accepts their role and seniority, and in turn
   acknowledge and accept the role and seniority of others.
-* The responsibility to those we serve, when we take on a role of
+* The responsibility to those who depend on us, when we take on a role of
   responsibility and power, is acknowledged and accepted.
 * Everyone is rewarded equitably for their contributions.
-* Everyone is responsible - and accountable - for their actions; good and bad,
+* Everyone is responsible - and accountable - for their actions: good and bad,
   "Guilt" and "Merit" belong with whoever earned them.
 
 Further explanation can be found in [[discussion]].