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 * Systèmes Libres is developing graphics and compute drivers in conformance with the open standards Vulkan and OpenCL (**should we remove opencl until we have had a proper discussion of ROCM on bugzilla?**).  Using open standards makes rebuilding or using existing algorithms a simple and easy process.
 
 4. Systèmes Libres’ completely libre hardware-software stack enables an unprecedented level of insight into the entire system.
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  a. Developers can begin their investigations at the top analyzing high-level software, then down into firmware.
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  b. at the lowest level, they can examine detailed schematic diagrams.
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  c. The developer can easily see the function of individual components as well as all of the relationships in the system.
 
 # Part 3 - Security and Privacy in RTOS and Industrial IOT
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 * At the level of millions of sensors, power draw must be minimized to lower the overall power bill
 
-* Our chip uses less energy that existing cpu-only microcontrollers, it uses an order of magnitude less power than existing cpu with a tacked on gpu microcontrollers (**numbers??** - no, because this isn't true.  you have to focus *really* hard on optimisation to make this true).
+* Our hybrid CPU-GPU chip uses less energy that existing microcontrollers that use a cpu with a tacked-on gpu (**numbers??**)
 
 
 # Part 5 – Cost