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-LibreRIS-V M-Class
+Libre RICS-V M-Class
 
-A 100% Libre RISC-V chip for mobile devices, with a Libre 3D GPU.
+A 100% libre RISC-V + 3D GPU chip for mobile devices
 
 The Libre RISC-V M-Class is a RISC-V chip that is libre-licensed to the
 bedrock. It's a low-power, mobile-class, 1.5 GHz, 64-bit SoC suitable
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 bootloader, but also for the processor, its peripherals and its
 3D GPU and VPU.
 
-The GPU is called [Kazan3D](https://salsa.debian.org/Kazan-team/kazan).
-Kazan3D is a libre licensed
-software-rendered [Vulkan3D](https://www.khronos.org/vulkan/) LLVM Driver
-written in Rust.  Optimised 3D instructions will be designed and added
-to the Libre RISC-V SoC, to reach a mobile-class performance and power
-budget.
+Onboard the Libre RISC-V M-Class is the
+[Kazan3D](https://salsa.debian.org/Kazan-team/kazan) GPU, a
+libre-licensed software-rendered
+[Vulkan3D](https://www.khronos.org/vulkan/) LLVM Driver written in
+Rust.  Optimised 3D instructions will be designed and added to the
+Libre RISC-V M-Class SoC, to reach a mobile-class performance and
+power budget.