From: Luke Kenneth Casson Leighton <lkcl@lkcl.net>
Date: Mon, 29 Jul 2019 17:39:15 +0000 (+0100)
Subject: grammar/reorder
X-Git-Url: https://git.libre-soc.org/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=0030b84db39b22060c48439ba68c9e634696495f;p=crowdsupply.git

grammar/reorder
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diff --git a/updates/019_2019jul16_purism_donation.mdwn b/updates/019_2019jul16_purism_donation.mdwn
index 4173188..df82c54 100644
--- a/updates/019_2019jul16_purism_donation.mdwn
+++ b/updates/019_2019jul16_purism_donation.mdwn
@@ -27,8 +27,8 @@ Purism then moved quickly to provide a BIOS update to disable this
 "feature," eliminating the last and most important barrier to being
 able to declare a full privacy software stack.
 
-Purism deserves our respect and gratitude for these kinds of brave
-strategic decisions to kick the trend towards privacy-invading
+Purism deserves our respect and gratitude for this type of brave and
+strategic decision-making to kick the trend towards privacy-invading
 hardware "by default."
 
 However, just as NLNet recognises, Purism also appreciates that we