From: Joshua Harlan Lifton Date: Mon, 29 Jul 2019 17:33:10 +0000 (-0700) Subject: Re-word awkward sentence X-Git-Url: https://git.libre-soc.org/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=f2e5912f27308a07bc8f0a728617515c2ad507c8;p=crowdsupply.git Re-word awkward sentence --- diff --git a/updates/019_2019jul16_purism_donation.mdwn b/updates/019_2019jul16_purism_donation.mdwn index d607029..4173188 100644 --- a/updates/019_2019jul16_purism_donation.mdwn +++ b/updates/019_2019jul16_purism_donation.mdwn @@ -27,9 +27,9 @@ Purism then moved quickly to provide a BIOS update to disable this "feature," eliminating the last and most important barrier to being able to declare a full privacy software stack. -It is these kinds of brave strategic decisions to kick the trend -towards privacy-invading hardware "by default" for which Purism -deserves our respect and gratitude. +Purism deserves our respect and gratitude for these kinds of brave +strategic decisions to kick the trend towards privacy-invading +hardware "by default." However, just as NLNet recognises, Purism also appreciates that we cannot stop at just the software. Profit-maximising corporations just