Re-word awkward sentence

[crowdsupply.git] / updates / 019_2019jul16_purism_donation.mdwn

diff --git a/updates/019_2019jul16_purism_donation.mdwn b/updates/019_2019jul16_purism_donation.mdwn
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--- a/updates/019_2019jul16_purism_donation.mdwn
+++ b/updates/019_2019jul16_purism_donation.mdwn
@@ -27,9 +27,9 @@ Purism then moved quickly to provide a BIOS update to disable this
 "feature," eliminating the last and most important barrier to being
 able to declare a full privacy software stack.
 
-It is these kinds of brave strategic decisions to kick the trend
-towards privacy-invading hardware "by default" for which Purism
-deserves our respect and gratitude.
+Purism deserves our respect and gratitude for these kinds of brave
+strategic decisions to kick the trend towards privacy-invading
+hardware "by default."
 
 However, just as NLNet recognises, Purism also appreciates that we
 cannot stop at just the software.  Profit-maximising corporations just